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This is a poem I have changed a bit. It is my poem for teachers on Malakoff in Moss

Just for you:

Life is creeping along

Motivation found in every song

Brought up to positivity

Tore down like insanity

The song got strong

I was climbing along

 

Needed some mouth to- feed

Motivation was the greed

The brains impulse could not lie

The tool of sunshine came by

 

Brainstorm with good revelations

Soon I will do my celebrations

Nerves trigger the volcano

Is there negativity?

No!

 

Situations pressure consumes me

I have found my treasure

Truly!

 Life with good respiration

Thank you school of education

 

I cry out loud for humanity

I found my true insanity

Knowledge of common life

The beauty of sacrifice

Analyze this!

I am no wiz

 

Listen!

Whom it may concern

My poem you earn

Knowledge above all

Threw me against the wall

 

Living in a world of grey

You’ve lightened up my day

Inspirational pencil penetrate

The open hole

Gives breath to your soul

 

Orators spoke sincere

Touché

The light is near!

 

The highest mountain-foam

Creation of a poem

Right here

And everywhere shall be

Come feel the burn in me

My plea for eternity

And all

So swell!

No concern!

Don`t dwell!

My heart burn!

Right here with you

 

The foam of love is true

My poem is just for you

Long for yesterday

I need some feedback on this poem:

I long for yesterday

When the sky doesn`t quiver

The children sing and play

I`m going down the Mississippi river

 

The flashing light in my eyes

Eat me up inside

Consuming all the lies

There is nowhere to hide

 

Yeah to yesterday I long

I see the land so wide

Where there is no wrong

I see the land with pride

 

Deceit and corruption

Living day by day

Enormous eruption

I long for yesterday

 

In dreams I have today…

There is no thought to curse thee

No forming of the fray

Tomorrow

 I kneel

 to beg for mercy

Yesterday

 today

Today should be yesterday

Humanity hear me when I say

Love shall rise up from the grey

 

Suddenly

Not yesterday

But tomorrow came along the way

Hoping today

That tomorrow will not stay

 

A shower of bullets within the blink of an eye

Tomorrow is here to betray

Waiting for you to say goodbye

Yesterday has gone away